Some of the instruments at the beginning seem to be playing a bit out of scale(not sure if that's intentional, if it is one thing you could do is have this instruments get reintroduced but play on pitch. the effect would be much more effective that way)
also the second section goes on for a bit to long.
I do enjoy the overall composition
and 2:26 - 2:48 I really enjoy
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I love all the watery sounds under the piano. Great job!
This is really cool! the drums at the beginning kinda drown out the guitar. so id suggest having them a bit quieter.
This is pretty good! I like the mood you'r going for.
Id say it is that there's a bit too much reverb.
The guitar at the beginning is sick!
Hmm, I get what your trying to go for, One thing i'd say is that you should try to fill up more frequencies (By that i mean have your instruments sit at different octaves) since the
drums kinda muddy the guitar.
This sounds like something from Metroid with the long pauses and the background noise.
Pretty good! the only thing I would say is that the main melody is a bit to repetitive. But the vocal samples do add some more variety.
Next time maybe try adding some other instruments after the B segment and see if it helps.
Pretty nice! love the piano and chorus. it kinda reminds me of celeste.
you could make the drums a bit quieter.
this sounds great! its way more relaxed that the original.
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