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That baseline is AWESOME. I wish I could make a baseline like that. Im gonna download this!

8D cool

Excellent Track! I like the ideas presented and the simple melody.
Reminds me of something you'd hear in a homestuck flash.
I think that adding some low chords would help give it some extra weight.
(super personal preference here but one of the SGM soundfont's grand pianos would do wonders. )

qlx-i responds:

Thank you :)

I think the lack of layering is kind of a bad habit of mine already, it started because LMMS isn't really doing anything to prevent phasing issues by default (I still don't think I got around this). I tried to get some sort of harmony going at ~1:06, but even with two notes bass already sounds muddy :c

Believe it or not, I'm actually more of a piano guy myself, however another bad habit of mine (which goes beyond composing) makes me only take things via word of mouth so I'm yet to get into soundfonts and only piano vst "I" found never really sounded like I wanted to :)

Thanks for responding, you really made my day :P
I can link a project file, you can add what you want yourself lol

I love the cymbals in this.

1:08 - 1:34 is my favorite part.

Some of the instruments at the beginning seem to be playing a bit out of scale(not sure if that's intentional, if it is one thing you could do is have this instruments get reintroduced but play on pitch. the effect would be much more effective that way)
also the second section goes on for a bit to long.

I do enjoy the overall composition
and 2:26 - 2:48 I really enjoy

I love all the watery sounds under the piano. Great job!

This is really cool! the drums at the beginning kinda drown out the guitar. so id suggest having them a bit quieter.

This is pretty good! I like the mood you'r going for.
Id say it is that there's a bit too much reverb.

The guitar at the beginning is sick!

Hmm, I get what your trying to go for, One thing i'd say is that you should try to fill up more frequencies (By that i mean have your instruments sit at different octaves) since the
drums kinda muddy the guitar.

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