this is really good! you could make the square a bit louder to make it stand out more. and also add in a bit more progression like introdus another isntument or have a b seggment.
its cool seeing more beebbox users on ng!
this is really good! you could make the square a bit louder to make it stand out more. and also add in a bit more progression like introdus another isntument or have a b seggment.
its cool seeing more beebbox users on ng!
Thanks! To be honest, I was about to upload a new file over this one that added more chords and a harmony to the melody (among other things), so it's great to see that the changes weren't unnecessary!
really nice
Intresting. the gutair is really divorsed from the rest of the song. if you remover the guitar ore at leased made a more coherent main melody. this song might be bearable to listen to.
Good Job!
pretty generic. went on for too long without any notable progression or changes.
the least you could have done was add that edm "BMMMMMMMM" sound at the end
the lyrics also dont make any any sence. its like you just strung a bunch of computer relateds words together and haphazardly sculpted them into a sentence.
Also you forgot to cedit the singer. so please go and do that.
intresting. the drums could be a bit louder and also it cold help if you could add a bit more to the chorus each time since it gets rather repetitive. otherwise, pretty good.
love this!
Thank you so much!
Props to all the artist that contributed! Everyone Here did an outstanding job representing all the series present.
Heres to another 30 years of Newgrounds!
I really like the main melody. bitcrushing here, it makes the square sound like a guitar.
also what is that instrument that shows up at 1:15?
The instrument showing up at 1:15 is a sine.
Glad you liked my track, tysm
this sounds great!
I like the bass and the vocals, also who wrote/slash sang them?
Original work my friend
i make stuff
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